Get to Know Basic Email Writing Structures(Week 1)
Introduction to Course
- Email and Editing Basics
- Subject Lines and Email Text
- Introductions and Announcements
- Requests and Apologies
- Culture Considerations
Email an Introduction of Yourself to Your Course Peers
Tips: I can't write a good email right now!api
Hi!ide
My name is Xinzhe Wang and I come from China. My native language is Chinese so it's little hard for me to write a good e-mail with the right format. The reason that I attend to this specialization in Coursera is I will pursue my M.S. degree in UC Davis in the 2020 fall, so I want to practise my English skills before that time. I will try my best to learn this course! Thank you for you reading this letter! Hope you healthy and safe!post
Xinui
DOs and DON'Ts in Professional Email
DO:Have a PROFESSIONAL EMAILthis
Subject Line
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DO:Have a subject lineorm
- clear and specific
- example
- Subject: Requesting a Meeting
- Subject:Canceling My Order
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DON'T: Don't forget writing basics, like spelling correctly, and getting grammar,punctuation, and captalization right.three
Greeting
- Dear Professor Lee (Use the job title)
- Dear Sir / Dear Madam
- use for addressing a company
- use for addressing a group
- Dear Members of the Committee
- Dear Marketing Group
- Dear Sales Team
Email Text
= Main MESSAGE + All necessary DETAILSip
- DON'T: Don't write long emails, only include ESSENTIAL DETAILS, remain BRIEF.
- one or two paragraph, no paragraph should be more than three or four sentences long.
- 1-2 Requests.
- DON'T: Don't COMPLAIN or BLAME.
- Self Blaming
- Perhaps... was incomplete
- Perhaps I left somethings out...
- DO: Always add WORDS of THANKS
Closing
- Keep it SHORT and SIMPLE
- Add SIGNATURE
- Xinzhe(First name) Wang(Last Name)
- Telephone / Fax number
- DON'T: Don't send until you READ and CHECK.
- DO: Think about CULTURE, Consider your READER
Organization, Style & Editing Basics
BE BRIEF
- Use your OWN WORDS
- Use your OWN MESSAGE
- Say ONLY what is NEEDED
- We often add adjectives and adverbs and filler words which are not necessary.
- DO: Focus on PRECISION
- DON'T: Don't use PASSIVE voice, use active, which is more clear.
- Words to AVOID
- must
- should
- demand
- require
- necessity
Common Errors in Punctuation
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6 Common Errorsci
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apostrophe 'rem
- Suzi's laptop
- Gerry's address
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exclamation point !
- DON'T use more than 1 time.
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comma ,
- with FANBOYS(for,and,nor,but,or,yet,so)
- LIST of things
- GEOGRAPHICAL NAMES
- DATES
- TITLES
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semicolon ;
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quotation marks " "
- DON'T use for emphasis
- Use for direct SPEECH only
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emoticons 😃
- DON'T use emoticons in emails
Common Errors in Capitalization
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Use a capital letter at the beginning of every sentence. Also, use it after you end with a period.
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PROPER NOUNS //e.g. Tokyo, Japan
PROPER NOUNS(Adjectives). //e.g. French wine
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PEOPLE & TITLES
- The Pope | Pope Francis
- The Queen | Queen Elizabeth
- President Obama | The President
- Title VS Occupation(Job) // Yes VS No
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DON'T capitalize prepositions //e.g. Lord of the Ring
Assignment: Rewrite Kevin's Email
Subject:
Canceling My Order
Message:
To Whom It May Concern:
My name is Kevin Johnson. I feel apologized that I have to cancel my order of the office chair that I made last week because of some personal reasons. And I want to know whether can I get a full refund to my account. Thank you for your patience and hope you healthy and safe.
Regards,
Kevin